She walked like an angel from infinity towards me.
Her lips and eyes gleaming with perfect outlines.
The closer she came, my heart began to skip a few beats.
I whistled a rhyme, loud enough for a few eye to eye glances.
She extended her tender hands towards me and said
"One - Stella Maris College"
that's a cool attempt!
ReplyDeleteSomehow I cud never express in limited words
Same with me too n hence this experimental n brave attempt at corking the word flow...!!!
ReplyDeleteGood storyteller ....
ReplyDeletea nice one... must have had many experiences of this sort.... but why stella maris college?????
ReplyDelete@Sundar - :) thanks...
ReplyDelete@Lalitha - *...hush hush...* some college in chennai to identify easily...n the first one that came across in the mind..!!!
Nice one da !!
ReplyDeleteohh really.... Proud to say am an Ex-stella marian...
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starting u r journey with stella mary's..!!!??? innum naraya edhirpaakaren..!!!!
ReplyDelete@Muku - Thanks man...
ReplyDelete@Lalitha - I'm not surprised to hear that from a Stella Marian topper :)
@Ganes - Yeah...I guess the journey has begun..!!!
hahahaha! Nice! Me likes! Sounded like "The world is my Lesbian wedding!" Got me?
ReplyDeleteYeah...now I got it.. :D
ReplyDeleteWhooaaa !! I got the hang of it.. i guess.. m inspired seeing your blog da.. Maybe i shld start blogging too.. :)
ReplyDelete@Saras - Sure..ur goood at writing...waiting to read urs..!!!
ReplyDeleteHi ! Stumbled from pallavi's blog and this was a fantastic 55 fiction! A very intelligent story that also packs the shock element at the end.
ReplyDeleteP.S - I enjoyed it even better, thanks to the stella maris bit :) Any self respecting college guy in chennai is bound to visit stella atleast once a year and more if he is lucky :P
@Ranjith - Thanks pal :), I never thought that Stella Maris reference would be a favorite for someone.
ReplyDeleteP.S: Are you from Chennai by any chance?
@Charan - I was born and brought up in chennai, and was thr till i finished my engg from ceg. Now, living in hyd, an equally nice city !
ReplyDeleteThat's soooper cool....Now I understand the reason behind your tryst for Stella Maris :)
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