Monday, August 23, 2010

Hypnotized



She walked like an angel from infinity towards me.

Her lips and eyes gleaming with perfect outlines.

The closer she came, my heart began to skip a few beats.

I whistled a rhyme, loud enough for a few eye to eye glances.

She extended her tender hands towards me and said

"One - Stella Maris College"

17 comments:

  1. that's a cool attempt!

    Somehow I cud never express in limited words

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  2. Same with me too n hence this experimental n brave attempt at corking the word flow...!!!

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  3. a nice one... must have had many experiences of this sort.... but why stella maris college?????

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  4. @Sundar - :) thanks...
    @Lalitha - *...hush hush...* some college in chennai to identify easily...n the first one that came across in the mind..!!!

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  5. ohh really.... Proud to say am an Ex-stella marian...
    :)

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  6. starting u r journey with stella mary's..!!!??? innum naraya edhirpaakaren..!!!!

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  7. @Muku - Thanks man...
    @Lalitha - I'm not surprised to hear that from a Stella Marian topper :)
    @Ganes - Yeah...I guess the journey has begun..!!!

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  8. hahahaha! Nice! Me likes! Sounded like "The world is my Lesbian wedding!" Got me?

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  9. Whooaaa !! I got the hang of it.. i guess.. m inspired seeing your blog da.. Maybe i shld start blogging too.. :)

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  10. @Saras - Sure..ur goood at writing...waiting to read urs..!!!

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  11. Hi ! Stumbled from pallavi's blog and this was a fantastic 55 fiction! A very intelligent story that also packs the shock element at the end.

    P.S - I enjoyed it even better, thanks to the stella maris bit :) Any self respecting college guy in chennai is bound to visit stella atleast once a year and more if he is lucky :P

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  12. @Ranjith - Thanks pal :), I never thought that Stella Maris reference would be a favorite for someone.






    P.S: Are you from Chennai by any chance?

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  13. @Charan - I was born and brought up in chennai, and was thr till i finished my engg from ceg. Now, living in hyd, an equally nice city !

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  14. That's soooper cool....Now I understand the reason behind your tryst for Stella Maris :)

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